Author's Comments:

Miruku, 27 Feb 2006 09:38 pm

Hmmm, I just realized that Alicey sounds rather redundant when she uses the word "money" in two consecutive bubbles...now that's going to bug me. Dang.

User's Comments:

Miruku, 27 Feb 2006 12:15 am

Oh, no, you're not A.D.D. Even I notice how slowly it's moving.

The intertwining of the plots hasn't really happened yet. For about 20-30 more pages I'm still working on strongly establishing the main characters, which I may well be overdoing, and certain parts of their life and past.

Trust me, I can't wait until I get to where the two sides officially meet (again).

Thanks for the kind comment, I'm glad you like it!

PJupiter, 05 Jun 2007 12:22 am

i don't think it's moving too slowly, it's moving just right, it's not confusing and it lets you appreciate allthe little things in the drawings that you might not otherwise notice, but that's just my opinion!

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